WOW! I really liked how you put red as your writing, red is my favourite colour. I remember green leaves shading me too! Maybe next time you could put a photo in!
WOW! Paige this is amazing work I am very proud of you. I remember tasting sausages off the B.B.Q as well. Maybe you could add in a picture or use some more color.
Hello Paige my name is Tali from St Bernadette's School. This is my first time going on your blog and I thought your work on That was Summer poem was WONDERFUL. I liked how you remember tasting B.B.Q and made your writing red. Maybe next time you could make your work a little bit bigger because it is a little hard to see and maybe add a little picture as well.
Hi my name is Mia from Yaldhurst School and I like this post because you have done very well writing this poem. I liked it but what does it have to do with the alliteration. When I was reading it I didn't spot any alliteration.
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WOW! I really liked how you put red as your writing, red is my favourite colour. I remember green leaves shading me too! Maybe next time you could put a photo in!
ReplyDeleteWOW! Paige this is amazing work I am very proud of you. I remember tasting sausages off the B.B.Q as well. Maybe you could add in a picture or use some more color.
ReplyDeleteHello Paige my name is Tali from St Bernadette's School. This is my first time going on your blog and I thought your work on That was Summer poem was WONDERFUL. I liked how you remember tasting B.B.Q and made your writing red. Maybe next time you could make your work a little bit bigger because it is a little hard to see and maybe add a little picture as well.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Mia from Yaldhurst School and I like this post because you have done very well writing this poem. I liked it but what does it have to do with the alliteration. When I was reading it I didn't spot any alliteration.
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